Valentine

hey thanks guys, I will edit it some and post some more.

glad you liked it

thanks man.

Just one question...Are you really going to give that to your teacher with the language in it? At my school, I would get in trouble....

hello. sorry guys, I was trying to figure out how to put a picture on here. [img]

Thanks for the review Shine. You said this: VALENTIME!!! That's not my name-that's not my name-that's my my nameeeeee....They call me.... I crack myself up.

Thanks Crazy. I was hoping it would be intense for other people than me. Violet is supposed to be confusing, but she won't be for long. Yay! You didn't see ...

Okay people. Everybody thinks this is starting to drag. I really tried to make it exciting and stuff, but ir didn't work I guess. So, What can I do that ...

thanks for the comments. Hippie: the girl has had crimson eyes half the time for the entire story. It isn't normal, but its a side effect. ill change the religion ...

Yeah. I've been noticing that myself. I guess I didn't want to reveal things too fast. Now, I realize that I'll have to show more. Prepare to me in awe.

Thanks shine. I'm sorry, (I don't live in Colorado) I think I'll change it though. I like rainy places better. From now on, I'm interviewing my friends on their reactions ...

thanks people. I'm taking this all in. Hopefully, the next chapter, (4)will satisfy you.

Hey guys. I just wanted to thank everybody that reviewed this and "liked" it. Its my first writing piece that has been featured. I'm pumped! Stay tune for more.

Hey guys. I just wanted to thank everybody that reviewed this and "liked" it. Its my first writing piece that has been featured. I'm pumped! Stay tune for more.

thanks. If you read carefully, it's on saturday... no classes on the weekends. I guess they could be roomed by their age, but they aren't. Thanks