Vaidehi

i loved the way you described the characters! Seem life-like and of course real. And its quite engaging so do put up the next part of the story!

Veritas: Thanks for reviewing my work and i will definitely work on the rhyming part! Sahbrene: nice to see you enjoyed my poem!! Catslikebooks2: Thanks!And yup i think i will ...

As midnight creeps As a part of the world blissfully sleeps He steps out of his sanctuary effete the night being his allegiant shield. A sadistic smile plays 'round those ...