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Re: I don't have wounds to make my words bleed
The first line did the magic.
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Spandex Man
Hi. There. Your story has a nice build up. Leaving aside the grammatical errors or otherwise, the way you joined the direct speech with the paraphrase is really good. Conjunctions ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Spandex Man
Hi. There. Your story has a nice build up. Leaving aside the grammatical errors or otherwise, the way you joined the direct speech with the paraphrase is really good. Conjunctions ...
Jun 4, 2020
