VaiVedrai

Hello! I liked what you were getting at with this poem. I felt that you were trying to express this strong pull we all feel towards someone at one point ...

First of all, thank you both for replying! Herzing: I mostly just used that specific capitalization because I guess it's just natural for me to hit enter and then capitalize. ...

I liked that the first lines were short. Like others said, they weren't really grabbing, but I still wanted to keep reading. I too am totally confused about the "attention ...

Take a hint, okay? I said. Not directing it to him. Take a hint, okay? I said. A fleeting notion in time. But then that name popped on my screen. ...

Hi! I can already tell that you guys at YWS are really inviting! To answer a few of your questions... Meadow: I haven't actually seen any Cirque shows. However, I've ...

It's my first time reviewing (is that the correct term?) another's poem on here, so bear with me... I really liked that it was short and broken into the different ...

Hey, everyone! I'm VaiVedrai. I'm new to YSW and was introduced to it by my friend. So a bit about me is that I'm new to writing. I hope that ...