Utopia

The order will all make sense in the next chapter and most of your questions will be answered.

Thanks Timmy. I have a feeling you'll like the next chapter. Its a real question awnserer.

Great chapter! I can't really review now but keep up the good work and I love where this is going.

Thanks for the review. The part where Dawn answered herself was just a typo. Aura's memory isn't completely wiped out, she still remembers her past life. Its just the mission ...

Thanks Deanie, for the review. And thanks a lot for your donation!

Thanks for the review. I really need to work on those redundancies which is something I'm facing a lot in my work right now. Do you at least kind of ...

Thanks for the review. I really need to work on those redundancies which is something I'm facing a lot in my work right now. Do you at least kind of ...

Thanks Timmy. There were, yet again, more mistakes! Grammar is what really brings me down. You will understand the perspective change when the next chapter is posted. I really should ...

Thanks Wolfare. I really need to go over my grammar but I kind of posted this in a rush. You will understand the perspective change if you read on...

Thanks for the review. I don't know what's wrong with my keyboard, but it keeps changing my quotations. My posts aren't really in the books actual chapter form though, so ...

Thanks for another great review. I find that it is hard to show feeling in third person. You're right about the males and for the next chapter, I've thought more ...

Thanks for the review! There is something wrong with my keyboard. I don't know why it does that to my quotation marks.

Thanks for the review! There is something wrong with my keyboard. I don't know why it does that to my quotation marks.

Thanks for the review! I definitely think I need to work on my grammar and punctuation. The actual story-line is good but they are still things that can be changed. ...

Thanks for the review. i did only use one sentence to describe the chutes so I can understand why that was hard to understand.