Utopia

Utopia Dreamworld here, I loved the build up in tension I got while reading this. Action scenes are always the hardest for me, but the action here was described perfectly. ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, When is the climax happening? I feel like you've been holding back, the climax is supposed to reveal the goal of the book and be what the ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, I like how Tamara doesn't forgive her mother so easily after what she did and after she gets her answers still wants to stand on her own ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, Popped in for a quick look. Came to see what all the commotion was about! I found one nitpick and I'm pretty sure somebody else has said ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, Naomi! Poor Naomi! She´s so young and innocent! Your story-line is killing me! Looking through your story, I could find nothing serious that the others didn't mention, ...

Utopia Paradise here, Great continuum. At the part where Avril was boiling with rage and about to attack Kor, I stopped and re-read that part, and I almost felt what ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, Oops! I think I reviewed 4.2 before I read this one! Anyway, I think I'm starting to see where this is going... Chinese terrorists... Targeting Americans... Rebelling ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, So, they're in Shenzen after all. I don't know much about China, but do beggars usually have men with guns accompanying them? The chapter starts off with ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, I really liked this continuum, it was the normal day in the life of Avril, yet you still made it interesting enough for us, which brings me ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, ''The front door slammed downstairs. Immediately the fear rushed through my body. It was icy cold and made me shiver. I refused to let my hands shake; ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, “I don’t want to be a princess anymore. I want Mommy and Daddy back.” This chapter really stood out to me. It was so realistic and I ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, Oh no! How could we have forgotten about the flutists! Nitpicks first, it seems like you wrote this in a hurry. “Ben, Christmas needs to be happen,” ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, We finally know something about the terrorists! Unfortunately, it's in Chinese. Now we just have to wait for Boyle to translate to Avril! I'll start off with ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, Great poem! It seems to describe, and tell us things in amazing ways. Like for instance: by telling us that we can't understand, reveals a personal side ...

Utopia Dreamworld here, I told you that boy would return! Although I didn't expected it in the next chapter! Okay, we'll still have to wait to know about the terrorists, ...