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Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 3: All Quiet On The Labor Front
Thank you very much for the praise. Reviews do help a lot... really, it's one of the only reasons I have the motivation to continue writing. The scum patrol is ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 2: A Scene Of Graphic Violence On The Television
Thank you for pointing that out. It's really something I need to get a handle of.
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 2: A Scene Of Graphic Violence On The Television
Thank you for the review. I decided that I would keep "chitterbug" lowercase, as that's just a colloquial term that humans use for them. A slur, really. The issue would ...
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 2: A Scene Of Graphic Violence On The Television
Thank you for the review. I appreciate the kind words and the criticism all the same.
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 1: The World As It Is in the Year 2555
Thank you for the comprehensive and constructive criticism. I will be honest and say I felt a little tinge of discouragement after reading your review, but it is not due ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: The Style of Mr. Edumacated
I'll be keeping a lookout for your next work.
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Scum Patrol: Scene 1: The World As It Is in the Year 2555
Thank you for the kind words. To quickly address the tense part, it was an accident that I left in on purpose because I thought it was a nice juxtaposition. ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: The Beach
This poem made me laugh. However, it was not out of derision. I quite liked this poem. It reminds me of simpler times. I appreciate the unending positivity that radiates ...
Sep 14, 2020
