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Re: Clouds
By the way, any feedback (including harsh criticism) would be greatly appreciated. I want to learn as much as I can because poetry is a major interest of mine. As ...
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Re: We Are
Overall this poem had the great strength of pervasive imagery. Indeed when writing about a dream, we sometimes remember vividly every sense that 'existed' during that dream. I would like ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Clouds
So again today follows the underworld’s uprising storm clouds coiling to Hades modern breath…... There was midnight revolution in the cold current as I slept-half under the city’s blanket unawar
Sep 18, 2011
