UrbanNomad

Hello there reviewer! Can you please help me out Any advice will go a long way on my poem Thanks

Hello Could you spare a moment to critique mi nueva poema? Thanks, Oliver

It amazes me how many personal similarities this poem reminded me of in myself. I often stay awake, trying to write, unable to sleep, feeling like the day has been ...

Lumi, I have a special poem for you to rip apart/praise or show disgust for... "The New Congregation" It is about spirituality in modern times from my city of Auckland, ...

This is definitely a topic that would scare away most poets, especially because of its taboo subject and the element of family criminality. I think that you have suceeded to ...

Your poetic style is very interesting to read and there is a strong clarity to the piece. Most of the lines were well structured and as a result there was ...

Hello! Could you please give me some feedback on "The New Congregation". I am looking to refine it down from its initial presentation. Thanks in advance Oliver

He who receives baptism by rain at 3a.m. not renewed from yesterday’s ritual piss up; a twelve-dollar bottle with the supermarket voucher his warm companion worn like a cotton blanket ...

Hello, have a read of my poem if you've any time... Thanks in advance, Oliver

Hi :) Firstly, well done on writing this poem, "Running from the Devil" tackles an important issue of existence and the boundaries we all sometimes cross. Nobody in the comments ...

Maddy... The poem's strength was that it was literal, non ambiguous and very easy to relate to. Many people could benefit from 'looking more closely' and not judging others solely ...

Just a quick note-if you would like to take a look at my poem 'Reflections of a Nomad' than I would be very greatful. Thanks, Oliver

Hola! I am a 17 year old poet from New Zealand and really would appreciate it if you read/critique my work. and I am making a big effort to sharpen ...

Hey there, I am from New Zealand and really need some feedback on my poem "Clouds" topic87751.html If you could have a look soon that would be great Thanks, Oliver ...

Hey! I need some feedback on my poem "Clouds" topic87751.html If you could have a look soon that would be great Thanks, Oliver