UrbanNomad

Stay here, stranger you are tired in your home of your home until it is home no more rest easy-but do not sleep the night blanket here to comfort you ...

My own happiness patches of sun on the valley floor wherever that great rift opens, nomad we are bound to Earth as movable stones and nothing warms like patches of ...

"Falling Asleep" has some good parts and some weak parts. The first stanza definitely left me with a positive impression, as it could have been so easily overwritten but you ...

I have been waiting to find a poem about revolution! This is a great and powerfully expressed piece of writing.The first stanza very much reminds me of the poet James ...

My favourite poet is James K. Baxter from New Zealand. My most disliked poet is myself on a bad day.

This is a brilliant example of abstract/minimalist writing and is open to interpretation in so many ways. I feel you could work on the overall structure however, as the lack ...

@GeeLyria Yo thanks for the feedback. The username is much more disproportionately cooler than myself, but yeah thankyou. Don't worry about being harsh, I literally wrote this poem today whilst ...

I heard that insanity is more of a repetition than anything else. Continuing actions past the used by date with old hands and thoughts. I am not insane I am ...

I heard that insanity is more of a repetition than anything else. Continuing actions past the used by date with old hands and thoughts. I am not insane I am ...

Wow I love your style of drawing!

"One plus One = Son" has a genuine voice in it-as a parent would speak to their child. This sort of thing happens very often, two adults having an unexpected ...

Despite what has been said, you don't need to capitalise the start of every line-in fact most contemporary poets stay away from this. Similarly, the punctuation is fine and the ...

Hi Camron, If I had to make a presumption it would be that you are not new to poetry because this is a very well structured piece of writing. Your ...

Those are true words. Read some of my other poems if you want to see thought provoking poetry

Ah, wasting away in an old room I have too much space to think and not enough to [live] or [move]- the sun won't come here again after first light ...