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Thanks! And yeah, I get what you're saying with the needle and thread, it just flowed through when I wrote it like that. Thanks for the compliments and constructive criticism! ...

Needle and Thread Take a Needle and Thread and sew through my head Something that makes sense in this world of disarray Take away my dread Take away my sorrow ...

Thanks so much! I didn't intend to rhyme in this poem, but in some stanzas I just had to. And at the end. :D Thanks for the spelling correction, I'll ...

Ten Secrets ~ A poem for school Secrets drift Like twigs in a river For almost anyone to give But never to take My hidden sister lives by a lake ...

I love how you you repeat "What has become of this land" and end with it. It just makes stresses the point, and lets you know what the poems about. ...

Very good. I liked it. All emotoins in life are just a distraction from the feeling of nothingness taht eareses them all. Or something like that. :D A little chilling, ...

The Modern Oracle pt. 2 I gaped at the space where my stairs should be. It was empty. No trace, just a wall, a blank white wall that went all ...

Amazing. Every descriptive, and interesting. I really wanted to read the poem. A Twisted Paradise. Twisted for the inhabitinats. Paradise for whom? Very nice. Only a few mistakes. And this ...

That was a really fantastic piece. I liked it alot. A good rhythm, and a it flowed very nicely. What was your message in the poem. What were you trying ...

"Hello Mr. and Mrs. Sherryboton," the plump old lady behind the desk smiled at the young London couple. They looked like like good people, maybe she'd sell -- no, deliver ...

The Modern Oracle pt. 0 (Prologue) I used to know -- no, think -- I was a normal girl. I think maybe deep down, I knew I wasn't normal the ...

Thanks for the reviews. I didn't know if it would be that good, but that's all encouraging. Thanks for the grammar and spelling corrections, I'm going to go fix them ...

The Modern Oracle pt. 1 "What now loser? You thought you were a step ahead of me, didn't you. That you were better? Well are you? Sitting there in my ...