Young Writers Society

Hey there, wow this is such a beautiful poem. So deep, so well-thought out. I like the rhyme scheme and how you stayed true to that pattern in every stanza. ...

Hey there. I just wanted to put in my two cents hopefully my opinion will be of some help to you. First I absolutely love the title, it really draws ...

Hey there, the name is Upile. I will be reviewing this poem if that's okay with you. :) Purple- Sentences I love Red- error Orange- if I don't understand. I ...

Hey there, I began reading this and I was inspired to put in my 2 cents. So here it goes, this will be quick. "She’s sorry she can’t trust, That’s ...

Hey there, I am Upile. i will be reviewing your work. "The drops of crystal fall down They fall so hard, they fall so fast. Breathless, left alone in the ...

Hello there. You did an okay job with this poem but I feel that the poem scheme was too predictable, that is always a bad thing. The reader likes to ...

Hello there. I love this poem. Really simple, and yet it just envelopes this emotion. I really love the way you are rhyming and the story behind it. there aren't ...

Hey there. Wow this was a great poem!! I totally have felt all these things actually I'm feeling them now. It's like you read all the emotions of my heart ...

Hey there, The name is Upile..(duh, I know ryt?.lol). Sorry for the detour, me and my crazy self. Anyway, I will be reviewing your poem today. Red is for errors, ...

Hey there This is very deep. I like it. One little problem, the part where you say "silence and mute will fill every room", the word 'mute' though it grammatical ...

Hello, I am Upile. I will be reviewing your poem today. Purple is for the lines I like, Red is for errors and if the need arises Orange is for ...

Hey there, Great poem. I know for certain that many are bullied and teased even as adults. This is something many can relate to even if they weren't bullied they ...

Hey there, I am Upile. Time is a beautiful topic, I loved how you expressed it in this poem. Bravo! My favourite lines are: "Today is yesterday’s tomorrow, And today ...

Hello there, I am Upile. And I will be reviewing your poem today. I am very interested by this poem because you have decided to write about something the entire ...

Hello there, My name is Upile and I will be reviewing your poem today. So you're telling me... I have the option to publish anything I want for free?! Whatever ...