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Hey there, wow this is such a beautiful poem. So deep, so well-thought out. I like the rhyme scheme and how you stayed true to that pattern in every stanza. ...

Hey there, short,simple,to the point and yet so full of emotional. I love blank verse because it harbors the most intimate of thoughts and feelings. Keep writing. Good job! xx ...

Hey there, Good poem. Enjoy reading it. Keep on keeping on. xx Upile xx

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We sat in an antique room drinking tea from a new old china set, everything collected things bought in their collections for collection Archaic paintings called 'Classics' and music played ...

Store all your sweetest dreams, Si Yes Qui I'd like to, I'd love to uproot the fairytale life I live behind my brown lids And freeze it in the now ...

Hey there. I just wanted to put in my two cents hopefully my opinion will be of some help to you. First I absolutely love the title, it really draws ...

Hey there, the name is Upile. I will be reviewing this poem if that's okay with you. :) Purple- Sentences I love Red- error Orange- if I don't understand. I ...

Hey there, I began reading this and I was inspired to put in my 2 cents. So here it goes, this will be quick. "She’s sorry she can’t trust, That’s ...

Floral stains, Cats and Love trains I am doomed to talking to walls and felines collecting whats old and making it older living in a small house that's draped in ...

Hey there, I am Upile. i will be reviewing your work. "The drops of crystal fall down They fall so hard, they fall so fast. Breathless, left alone in the ...

Hey there, I am Upile. i will be reviewing your work. "The drops of crystal fall down They fall so hard, they fall so fast. Breathless, left alone in the ...

From time to time I reoccur, slipping from my atmospheric home back to Earth and moments, In turn I return to life and all its scattered things, Time did not ...

Hello there. You did an okay job with this poem but I feel that the poem scheme was too predictable, that is always a bad thing. The reader likes to ...

Hey there I love this. Free verse is amazing, it allows words to flow right out of u without having to keep to the complexities of of rhyming. Keep it ...