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Re: Look what I made today!
O.O .. xD Awesome!
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: The Cobbled Streets of London.
Hi! Here's the review! Today had to be the best day of my life -EVER! This doesn't sound like something a working man would say. Maybe you should rephrase it. ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Trying to finish The Three Musketeers .... Then moving on to The Scarlet Pimpernel by Baroness Orczy... ^^ I'm on a classics marathon!
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
Hi angels symphony! Firstly, I just want to say that this piece is nicely written. I felt that your characters weren't flat at all... the chapter didn't reveal too much ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Is it weird that....
I don't think it's weird at all... In fact, I'm kind of also like that.. I won't even let my sisters and my parents read any of my works... If ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: The Gatekeeper
Hi Mira! Here's the review I promised you! Tears ran down my cheeks. I sobbed furiously, trying to wipe away the liquid running down my face. My best friend, Teresa, ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: A Bloody Un-Fairytale.1
Hi! Firstly, I would have to say that I think this chapter is full of could-be useless information. I think you should concentrate more on the important things. As she ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Handwriting Here!!
Here's mine... Not very readable, but what can I do?
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Blasphemy
Hello Fort! I'll just skip immediately to what I think about your piece since Moo has written most of the errors I found in your work. I like this piece, ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Untitled Prologue :)
Hallo Moo! Here's the feedback on your prologue: Avynn seemed even more alive in its last hours. The storm pulsed around the lone figure hunched over the balcony, lightning illuminating ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Yes, No, Black, White.
Depends on what flavor it is. Has the sun gone up yet?
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Yes, No, Black, White.
I'm also loving this! Can I ask for a favor?
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Rhyme Tyme
Lite
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Change One Letter
Elite
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Random Word Game!!!
Idiots
Jun 12, 2009
