Unrecompensed

Everything changes with texhnology. They made a judgement, and they changed their judgement when new facts arose. I support it. Pluto is not a planet. I'm more troubled by the ...

Every tax payer has money poured into the prisoners. It's not right those of other religions should pay for the education of another. Since a primary aim of prison is ...

Passive resistance does little in the way of results. Even Mandella realised this. I think it'd sad that his act was ignored and unseen. Furthermore, if you kill yourself how ...

I think there would be a lot of benefit from the releasing of the tape to the public. I'm sure a lot of people would recieve some closure on the ...

Incan, if you choose to critique something, you must be doing so with a want to help. If there's a chance of demoralising the writer, and doing more harm than ...

I thought the story was great, and the fact it was true added a lot (like it needed to be said). I didn't think it was too well written, but ...

I think before anyone comments, you should revise this yourself. There are several errors in the first paragraph alone. I critique, not babysit. - Andy

The safety was off, it seemed.

Thanks again.

If you're serious about making a novel work, don't take a break on the first write. If you do, you'll come back to strangers, and you won't know your characters ...

I don't get it. Why make more work for yourself? Okay, maybe as a little boredom cure, but to write a story? Surely it's better to go at a pace ...

Thanks for the obligatory welcome, guys. Myth, fantasy and historical are two of my favourites, actually. I prefer historical over fantasy. All the cliche has burned some of my passion ...

It is the idea, more than the prose, that sells a story. Your prose are in need of so much work, so I don't have to focus on them. You're ...

I don't have much time right now, so I apologise for the briefness. I'll be blunt and to the point, I guess. As you know, a sentence starts with a ...

I guess it's more true in short stories that one must make every word count -- you can't waffle or go off the point too much, with long lengths of ...