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If you listen to a song when you write, you have an extra mood that the reader doesn't have. If you are going to listen to music while you write, ...

I have a huge problem with prologues. Ninety nine times of your a hundred, you don't need it. See if you can fit it into the story, as prologues tend ...

Ideas sell stories, prose help. The ideas are the writers department, I'm afraid.

Third person is your best bet. I'd say scrap what you've written and start again.

Thanks for the double greet, Everyone. I hope we can meat somewhere, because I like meating people. Where should we meat

Snoink, I was simplying for the sake of a critique. I'd have expected you to see that, but I'll make it more obvious next time. There's no need in bogging ...

Readers choose not to read textbooks instead of stories for a reason; don't relay facts in lists and boring tone. Don't give me balanced agruments and situation, give me someone ...

You suffer from a huge problem here, Everyone. Passive sentences are very rarely your friend. They are like weeds in a garden; one or two may make your garden look ...

Welcome to the forum, Zeige. I used to draw, too, but I stopped when my drawings were no longer good for my age. *sigh* - Andy

I don't have much time right now, so I apologise for the briefness. I'll be blunt and to the point, I guess. As you know, a sentence starts with a ...

Don't talk in the second person, you won't get published. Basically, hook the reader. If you don't know how, read more. - Andy

I focus on the prose for those writers that haven't got the basics down (or enough for the prose to go unnoticed). For others, its the ideas behind the story. ...

Firestarter, I heard that joke too. It's amazing how fast jokes fly, even from Man. to Boro.

Thanks, fire. Now everyone can be just as cool as us and say Boro instead.

I don't appreciate the tone of your title, Sureal. Have some respect. Somehow 'dun dun dun' doesn't quite cut it.