UnicornNerd

I loved this story. Until the last paragraph. He's spending the entire story wondering how he'll ever live with out her, and then, not a week after she's dead, some ...

I Luke it skit. Very original. I couldn't tell what happen at the end, but the spoiler clears it up. Maybe you should add that information into your story? That ...

I. Loved. This. Story!!! It was so captivating from the beginning, you could really feel the MC's emotions and inner conflicts. The description was great and I fell in love ...

This was good. I liked the topic the whole way through. I thought it was really grafic if you to describe his paarents like that but that would probably be ...

This was really really good! It kept me reading the whole way through. It was interesting and a little confusing at the beginning but I understood what was happening by ...

I really liked this! The main character was charming and the idea of the story was interesting. I'm a sucker for spy/assasin stories, and this one was really good. It ...

Oh. My. Goodness. Wow! This totally boggled my mind! It was amazing and scarry and dark and funny, all at the same time! It reminded me of the Hunger Games. ...

Interesting idea. Although it is not necessarily original, it is an original representation of the concept. This was very interesting, and I can't wait to read more. I don't really ...

Wow. That was really depressing, yet inspiring in an odd sub-conscious way. It was compelling, yet made you feel like just sitting there at the same time. The only think ...

Wow! This was really good. I think you should turn it into a novel. Like, this would be the prologe and the actual story would lead up to it, explaining ...

I really enjoyed this piece. It was sad and touching at the same time. It really focuses on the importance of expressing your love to others. It also highlights the ...