UnicornNerd

Please read my novel, the shift. It science fiction. You can find it on my portfolio. Kthnxbai! :)

I'm looking to revew scifi Novals and short stories, hopefully with romance(but not needed) or romantic short stories. I'll do my best to review well. And I dOnt want aliens ...

Very sad!!! It almost mad rme cry, and it takes alot to do that. It was really good and you should keep writing!

"Cute!!! Loved it :) that's all I gotta say

Awww, thanks. I'm working on it :)

Thanks for reviewing, firt of all. Second of all, it's not the girl who grabs him. It's the men in white coats. Read the next chapter. I'm working on it. ...

Although I don't normally like space stories, this one was very interesting. I loved your decriptions! They were really vivid and beautifully worded. I thought your excicution was fine, if ...

Oh. My. Goodness. Wow! This totally boggled my mind! It was amazing and scarry and dark and funny, all at the same time! It reminded me of the Hunger Games. ...

Dax's eyes slowly opened, the fogginess blurring his vision. A suddened swarm of smells flew through his nose, fighting for attention. Steril metal. Sweat. Disinfectant. Vomit. Animal dander. The 17 ...

Dax couldn't help it. He screamed. He tore at the hands the were holding him captive. He broke loose and scurried to the back of his cage. "Looks like we ...

This was very interesting and kept mr glued to the page the entire time. Well done. I hope I see more of it. I think I'll check out your novel.

Interesting idea. Although it is not necessarily original, it is an original representation of the concept. This was very interesting, and I can't wait to read more. I don't really ...

Wow. That was really depressing, yet inspiring in an odd sub-conscious way. It was compelling, yet made you feel like just sitting there at the same time. The only think ...

Wow! This was really good. I think you should turn it into a novel. Like, this would be the prologe and the actual story would lead up to it, explaining ...

The ending made me read it over about five times. I thought he liked her!! It was a cool ending, nevertheless. Anyways, I can relate to this story because one ...