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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Gender Roles

    I think that differences and gender roles is a good thing. For instance, a woman can be femine, beautiful, and confident. A man can be masculine, strong, and protective. (I'm ...

    Feb 2, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: -Quiffin's Ultimate Tip Guide-

    Hmm, true. It is annoying when poor plot lines are garnished with high vocabulary, as if it were camouflage. I agree that is amateurish, and not very good cover up, ...

    Feb 1, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: -Quiffin's Ultimate Tip Guide-

    That is a very good point. But what about Edgar A. Poe? He came far after William Shakespeare, and is arguably nearly as well known. His many works, especially the ...

    Feb 1, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: -Quiffin's Ultimate Tip Guide-

    Replies to reviews: @Dreaming: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. That means a lot to me. @Alfred: Oh, darn it! Thank you for reminding me of the onomatopoeia rule! ...

    Jan 31, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: -Quiffin's Ultimate Tip Guide-

    Introduction Welcome! These are just some ideas I have come up with to aid my self and some others who seek me out for advice. I decided to place all ...

    Jan 30, 2012
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Shift: Chapter 2 And 3!

    Hey guys! ThAnks for all the reviews! I took them into consideration and fixed it up. I also added a third chapter! I hope you guys enjoy it, it took ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Shift: Chapter 1 (Pretty much redid the entire thing)

    Thanks for the reviews guys! they really helped and I took the into consideration when I re wrote it. They helped it alot. Thank you for helping me with this. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Stay Close to Me

    I loved this story. Until the last paragraph. He's spending the entire story wondering how he'll ever live with out her, and then, not a week after she's dead, some ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Battle Within*Revised*

    I Luke it skit. Very original. I couldn't tell what happen at the end, but the spoiler clears it up. Maybe you should add that information into your story? That ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Other Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    This was a compelling story. the ending is good, perfect for a prologue in a murder mystery. The only thing confusing was weather she killed herself of the rapist killed ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Pochahontas (spelling fail!)

    My name is pochahontas I sing every thing I say I constantly have drug induced delusions. Like talking trees I think are my relatives Or wind with colors Or otters ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For the Boy Who Sits In Front of Me in Science

    You barely notice me, but I notice you. I can feel when your in a room. When ever I see you, I feel my cheeks begin to burn. I only ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Shift: Chapter 1 (Pretty much redid the entire thing)

    Thanks for all the imput guys! It helps alot!

    Apr 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Pirate Stove

    Hilarious. Nuff. Said.

    Apr 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mailboxes and Hesitation

    I. Loved. This. Story!!! It was so captivating from the beginning, you could really feel the MC's emotions and inner conflicts. The description was great and I fell in love ...

    Apr 26, 2011


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