Unfinite

Just off the top of my head, evil spirits are normally attracted by the presence of 'evil' emotions in a person, so if your character is full of depression, a ...

Hey, first things first, a pretty good story from what I read. True to your description it's fast-paced and well-written. First qualm, if I'm not mistaken you've written a story ...

Thanks. And about the corpses... probably a bit OTT, but I just wanted to make a scene which really demonstrated how appearances can be deceiving.

I have to agree with everyone who is against the concept of a united planet, at least in terms of a singular state. I live in Northern Ireland and it ...

Just wrote this in a few minutes off the top of my head in an attempt to practise my descriptions and stuff. Tear it to shreds and let me know ...

First of all, thanks for the review! But yeah, looking for the things you pointed out I realised that my story is pretty lacking in terms of connection and tension. ...

I just made this to practice my action scenes as I have only started writing again recently, wrote it quite quickly. It centres around adrenaline taking control of someone in ...

"They are the goons", replied the old man rather unwillingly. Comma needs to be before the speech mark. - "goons," He looked straight in the map, trying to figure out ...

I voted novels, but I really like writing short stories. It's a tough one because I tend to write the first few chapters of a novel and then another bright ...

Chapter one- The enterance entrance The trees incased encased the small girl, and the voices continued to fill her head, with lies and total uncertainty. Morgana consider putting a period/full ...

One of your reasons for doing the dark fantasy is being able to use swords, right? There's no reason not to be able to do this wth the zombie idea. ...

I liked the story, very few spelling or grammar mistakes. My only criticism was a fact that took me really out of the flow of the story; after being impaled ...

I liked the story itself, it seemed to be really well written. You should have more faith in yourself, this story is really quite good, especially for your first post. ...