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Hey Austenite! Okay, love your story! I haven't read a good Romance story in a while, and when I have, they were all corny. Okay, I just have one critique: ...

I loved this story! I usually don't read short stories, but now I want to read more after reading this amazing piece! I was instantly lost in the story... loved ...

It was good, but still needs some work. I think the two comments above got it all mostly, but for me, I have a few things. One, what was the ...

A book would ultimately suck without any descriptions whatsoever, so a blind girl may not see these things but it does not mean the readers can't. But thanks for liking ...

Hey, I have a lot more of this story done but I just need to know if this is any good, because I need my motivation RENEWED!!! so help, please!!! ...

Oh my gosh that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job, wow... you have to keep writing!A few critiques is to stop using the whole "thingy" words and stuff like that. But, you ...

I thought it was pretty good except for a few errors that were already covered by other editors. Anyways, I can't wait to hear more!! :wink:

[quote="Apple"] Chapter 1~ "Don’t blame yourself for your family’s death Ava! None of the incidents that occurred is your fault.” Carla’s bronze hair fell into her eyes as she stared ...

I thought it was awesome! I have to disagree with some readers; the name of Number 129 is cool, and very fitting. I've written tiny things that I haven't posted ...

Loved this story! I couldn't find anything wrong with it... so I'll just give you my opinion! It's mysterious... and I think its wickedly awesome! (wickedly as in cool)! Keep ...

Yeah, this is Chapter One... I should probably write that as my title... hahaha! Anyways, glad you like it! :smt005

So this my first post... pretty excited about it... just critique and hope you like it :lol: The first paragrapg not indented is just my style, by the by. ---------------------------------------------

[quote="13timmy24"]He stumbled into his home, his head was now buzzing with thoughts.  Guilt, shame, stupidity, they all bore their marks on him.  He yanked open a cupboard door and pulled ...

I thought it was awesome, GoldenQuill. Very curious and interested in this story... keep up the good work! :elephant: :smt005 :smt005 :smt001 :smt002

Very interesting. Sort of a mass murderer that is suicidal in and amongst himself... I'm interested to see where you go with this, if you plan to go anywhere with ...