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I just want to say your series is absolutely positively amazing! I could see this being published, no joke. The diction is high up yet not too elegant, which is ...

Thanks, iheartbooks, and XChangeX, i really like this story, even though this first chapter was kind of boring, but my second is wayyyyyy better! Check it out, and thanks for ...

I eventually ended up into an old apartment, brown leather La Z Boy recliners and creaky wooden tables littering the home. Behind a tattered white curtain I could tell that ...

Hey people, this is a new novel I had worked on, lost interest, but now have fallen in love with again. Hope you like it! Critiques and comments would be ...

You MUST KEEP WRITING! I found this piece absolutely MARVELOUS! It's really great;awesome concept, awesome powers, awesome characters... awesome author... Its brilliant! Please keep writing!

Okay, I, am in LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!!! You HAVE to keep writing! Its... Its... Its amazing!!! I didn't see any errors... probably because I was too deeply involved in ...

I have only one critique, and it may be kind of confusing: You are using too much detail with things, like in your first paragraph about the ceiling fan and ...

Pretty good story... not many critiques, if any, but one problem that seemed to have fixed with your story is that you have slowed things down a bit, though some ...

A brilliant twist on a classic fairytale, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I hope you keep writing, because you have a LOT of potential! Loved it!

I'm a bit confused with this entire chapter, personally. So, first Vlora was trying to kill him or something, then the beautiful woman, and now Riley wakes up with Vlora ...

Just a few critiques: a few read overs will correct these problems, but there are some misspellings of a few words (such as some 'to's could be 'too's, and yes, ...

Okay, so in the last parts when the character starts saying "Now I am here writing this..." that transition is a little confusing but if you could make that slightly ...

I am totally entranced in your novel. It is great, and very exciting. I have noticed that you weren't cutting your sentences so short like you were in chapter one ...

As she took her child in her arms, she frowned at the girl, saying “You have been up here wasting time all morning. It isn’t raining very hard now—go tend ...

I absolutely love the gummy bear picture the absolute best! Not just because its a tasty gummy bear =) the color and contrast between the foreground and background is amazing. ...