Undercover_Ninja

Yeah those are good topics, you really should build on them if you had the time. Yes sometimes in America we forget that there are people going hungry every day, ...

That is a creative, imaginative story. I agree with Kaylyn, a few grammatical errors and a slightly blunt style. I think if you added a few more details, such as ...

Hey I tried to fix what you told me :D . Anything I missed, Or anything else that needs fixing? I don't think of Kyle as me anymore, really. If ...

Nice piece overall. It shows a great perspective, and sounds pretty cool. Good vocabulary, which I have never had. I'm just glad that I will spend my infinite eternity in ...

Yeah remember I can't do romance, so you will have to write the script for that, and I would welcome it. It's funny as soon as I posted this book ...

Wow I found that very entertaining and humorous! Yes, it's random and retarted, but that's the best part! :( ! That was a creative idea, good for a kids book.

I wrote a review for this on the other one. But it is a very intriguing book, can't wait to read more!

OK thanks! By the way this whole story is revolved around the climax, which I imagined in detail. I have written a basic outline for it so I won't forget. ...

Yeah that's the one at FCA. HaHA I hadn't planned on romance in it, but if you want it I will let you put it in :wink: . I'll let ...

To Stephanie: Chazz is a homeschooler nerd I gave my email to. You see, we had this election politics class thingy, and he was there. Although he's only twelve or ...

To scribblingquil: I'm not religious, though it may look like it :smt109 . Religion is a means of falsely satisfying man's nature to worship something. I believe in Jesus, not ...

Ok thanks. I took your advice on the next chapter. see how you like it. I appreciate all your reviews!

I have read the whole chapter of this that you gave me, and it was great! It has good action, and nice, strong character personalities. Great descriptions of each individual ...

Thanks! Yeah I've realized I wrote like that. I will try to improve in the future. As far as the teacher, I just like being a little comical sometimes. That's ...

Beautiful poem! Good contrast, and mysterious too. Passion, anger, love and fire :smt058 Tyler