Undercover_Ninja

Hmm... the only guy responding so far... oh well, that is a great poem and I see the truth behind it. You are a very talented writer, with a great ...

My sister really likes horses, but this is exciting even for me. I like the perspective from the horse, I can tell you understand animals well. I disagree with her, ...

Yeah that's pretty cool to think of when there's nothing else. But if you wrote that when you had nothing to write, Isn't that something to write in itself? :?

From what you showed it looks to me like an exiting book. When you post the rest I will love to read it. I am very curious who these soldiers ...

Wow! It will be awfully hard to critique that. Extremely well-written, great descriptions and personalities. That plushoriam world has me confused a bit, but that's good. Reminds me a little ...

Well some could spend years critiquing it because it's so long. An idea would be to make them into separate posts :( Some were good, others were quite simple, but ...

That's pretty cool! Yeah I think you could put in more deatail with your talent :wink: . I look up at the sky above me Above the ceiling of water ...

That's a pretty good poem to think up in a few minutes! A good name would be "no way out", that's the message I got. (Yes, I know that "bleeded" ...

Hey I really enjoyed that poem. There is a lot of truth in that, as well as a nice ring. Well, I can't really critique this, since I'm not experienced ...

Well, I really like the idea and creativity for this. Besides the grammar and spelling mistakes everyone pointed out, I think it's brilliant. The one place I stumbled on was ...