UnderTheStars

great use of describing words! the poem was sad and descriptive. that's my positive comment, my only critique are the constant commas. They make a pause not needed, it almost ...

This was great, but like stated earlier, only problem was the punctuating/capitolizing. Great sense of emotion.

A perfect boy, a perfect girl hand in hand They'll thrive together in this story book world side by side Beneath the oak tree, in the lovely fall air growing ...