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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Remembering

    great use of describing words! the poem was sad and descriptive. that's my positive comment, my only critique are the constant commas. They make a pause not needed, it almost ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bird

    This was great, but like stated earlier, only problem was the punctuating/capitolizing. Great sense of emotion.

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dreamland.

    A perfect boy, a perfect girl hand in hand They'll thrive together in this story book world side by side Beneath the oak tree, in the lovely fall air growing ...

    Jul 5, 2011


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins