UnderTheGun

I'm following your story because it's interesting. So far I want to keep reading, but this last chapter seemed kind of weak to me. There are a few things that ...

I love how I already have a great sense of what the characters are like, that's a sign of a great writer, but with so much of what you've written ...

Hey! I love vampire fiction so I thought I'd stop by and give you a bit of feedback on the first chapter of your novel. First, I think what you ...

I liked this, but like the others, I have to say that it does still need work. The story itself is grand, short, sweet, almost realistic, but at times while ...

This was good, but it's easy for the reader to get bored with the casual, sarcastic tone of the story, so I'd suggest you introduce something that Ayden can smile ...

I don't like the way you started this, but I think it's pretty good. Great even. I like that the speaker is nameless and faceless, I know enough about him ...

I really liked this. I'd say the title could use some work, but overall it was very catching. I was unsure about reading it and thought, "archangels? wolves? nah", but ...

The best part for me was the ending. I was so surprised to learn that someone so young could come up with such a powerful ending, but, with that said, ...