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Umbra413

Umbra413

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Network of Keys Chapter 7: Cynthia, More of the First Floor

    Hi! I liked how you made this chapter connected to pokemon, with how the wild fantiture appears out of the grass and the boy attacking it. I also liked how ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: first poem i ever wrote

    Wow! For the first poem you wrote it's pretty good. Though, there is some minor errors. Where you wrote,"That where i feel trap in space no one around," I got ...

    Oct 25, 2013


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane