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Uldin

  • Article / Essay » Science, General Re: Biodiversity Vs. Progress

    As a (hopefully) future conservation biologist, I obviously felt obliged to review this article :) Overall, a good essay, passionate, detailed and lively. A few corrections, however, would make it ...

    Apr 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Autobiography 1.2

    Hey there Lena :) here's your review, as promised. Here's the second part. This includes slightly less telling and more showing. However, the style is supposed to have a lot ...

    May 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: vengeance (chapter seven)

    How about a review? This looks interesting :) As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent increasingly frequent sounds better . Wave ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Silent Deceit

    Hello there! A little review... There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, I would remove the 'just'. It just sounds better to me. and I'm ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I've Heard Enough

    Great lyrics! Kind of sounds like 'Run Away', by Linkin Park :) I love the imagery of use, especially the 'heart', second paragraph A few things: "Oh oh, there is ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: As it Happens - anecdote 1

    Hey! I must say I had to re-read it a couple times to understand everything, but that's probably because I'm exhausted xD I don't agree with you, I thought this ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Autobiography 1.1

    Hello there! I don't usually read autobiographies, but this sounds interesting, so here you go, a review :) Two months. It scares the shit out of me to even think ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Currently Unnamed (Chapter Two)

    Hey! x x x "What? Why?" I was confused, to say the least. It was my sixteenth birthday and they wanted to leave. Most people would immediately jump to conclusions ...

    Apr 25, 2011


Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
— Sigmund Freud