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Re: Biodiversity Vs. Progress
As a (hopefully) future conservation biologist, I obviously felt obliged to review this article :) Overall, a good essay, passionate, detailed and lively. A few corrections, however, would make it ...
Apr 24, 2012 -
Re: Autobiography 1.2
Hey there Lena :) here's your review, as promised. Here's the second part. This includes slightly less telling and more showing. However, the style is supposed to have a lot ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter seven)
How about a review? This looks interesting :) As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent increasingly frequent sounds better . Wave ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Silent Deceit
Hello there! A little review... There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, I would remove the 'just'. It just sounds better to me. and I'm ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: I've Heard Enough
Great lyrics! Kind of sounds like 'Run Away', by Linkin Park :) I love the imagery of use, especially the 'heart', second paragraph A few things: "Oh oh, there is ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: As it Happens - anecdote 1
Hey! I must say I had to re-read it a couple times to understand everything, but that's probably because I'm exhausted xD I don't agree with you, I thought this ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Autobiography 1.1
Hello there! I don't usually read autobiographies, but this sounds interesting, so here you go, a review :) Two months. It scares the shit out of me to even think ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Currently Unnamed (Chapter Two)
Hey! x x x "What? Why?" I was confused, to say the least. It was my sixteenth birthday and they wanted to leave. Most people would immediately jump to conclusions ...
Apr 25, 2011
