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@ Hayden: Go whip yourself :twisted: No seriously it's fine, happens to me all the time^^ She's not exactly Biblical I'd rather say "not exactly conservatively biblical. The message of ...

Maybe you should recognize yourself as a deist? Your values, which I don't have a problem with at all, aren't generally recognized by Christ or Jewish-Christian teachings. I must say ...

Wrote an article on the subject, if any of you is interested :)

Hello everyone! I managed to gather good enough ideas for a novel, and I was wondering if you could help me out with the following questions: 1. Is it still ...

Hey there Lena :) here's your review, as promised. Here's the second part. This includes slightly less telling and more showing. However, the style is supposed to have a lot ...

How about a review? This looks interesting :) As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent increasingly frequent sounds better . Wave ...

Thank you so much! Though it would help me if you told me when my writing is bland :)

Hello there! A little review... There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, I would remove the 'just'. It just sounds better to me. and I'm ...

III. Revelations Once in the town, those who had fled like deer, Wiped off their sweat and drank their thirst away, Leaning against the cool stone of their ramparts. Meanwhile ...

Thanks to you too :) that would be really nice of you

Great lyrics! Kind of sounds like 'Run Away', by Linkin Park :) I love the imagery of use, especially the 'heart', second paragraph A few things: "Oh oh, there is ...

Haha thanks, hope you like it :)

Hey! I must say I had to re-read it a couple times to understand everything, but that's probably because I'm exhausted xD I don't agree with you, I thought this ...

II. Tribulations A cold breeze blew upon the plains under the bright, cloudless sky. The high, noon sun beamed, beating hard on Balamber the Hun's back as he stood, staring ...

Hello there! I don't usually read autobiographies, but this sounds interesting, so here you go, a review :) Two months. It scares the shit out of me to even think ...