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Re: Through These Eyes Chapter I
I must say; The title... it is one of my favourite. It drew me in, and I, not knowing what to expect, was pleasantly surprised. You have a very good ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Night Creatures, Chapter 2
Ok, I said i would do this with the first one, and somebody beat me to the punch, so I will try to get through this one for you. It ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Gone. Prelude
Thank you everyone. If there was one thing that I failed at in all of my stories, its with keeping the tense throughout the entire short story. Thank-you smylinG, I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Gone. Prelude
Dusk. The sun had finally set on the fourth day of the expedition. The small group of men and women were exhausted. Even I, the arguably most fit, had become ...
Jun 3, 2011
