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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hidden - Chapter One

    I like how descriptive it is. Lily is a good character, albeit she seems a little depressing to be around. One thing i suggest is to spend a bit more ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: What Lies Within

    Very descriptive. I like where it's heading and the characters are interesting.

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 1

    lol I know it's a little late, but thank you.

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Mostly Human Chapter 1

    it's good, but i was a little confused about who was speaking and what the setting was. i myself am more of a werewolf person, but i know a good ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Apocalpse:What now? Prologue

    it's good. One of my favorite genres of book and video games are futuristic post apocalypse types

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Night Stalkers and Skinwalkers Chapter 1

    Chapter 1: Introductions Lucy “Get up! I said get up!” She shouted at me. “I don’t want to fight you.” I tried to diffuse the situation. “You should have thought ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 1

    Lucy I was steady asleep at my desk, when the bell rang to signal the start of the school day. Like always, I was the first one in the classroom. ...

    May 7, 2011


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)