Tylexie

I laughed at "Trillion stars still snickering." I'm guessing we were all expecting only a few stars, but no. It was trillion, and humorous. I also laughed when you skipped ...

AHH the rhymes! They're so good! My favorite lines were: "The clock on the wall, it shows disaster," and "Type some words, doesn't matter what." I think they both rang ...

Hello, First I would just like to say that I am awed by this poem. It's short and punctual, and that helps it send an extremely powerful message. The repetition ...

I think this poem is very relatable. Many people find peace in the morning with a good book, and the way the message is conveyed is great. My favorite lines ...

I really like this poem; it's not often I can find a nice poem about writing in itself. The repetition of "I want to write something" in every stanza helps ...

Wow! This is very well written, and makes me want to read more already. Since you've pretty much got most of it covered... I'll just focus in on grammar. Oh, ...

This is a very well-written poem. The transitions are smooth, the writing heartfelt. The reference to guilt and blaming yourself in the 2nd stanza is accurate. After a death, you're ...

This is really nice poem! It conveys a very peaceful, happy vibe, and it's something I would read when I'm stressed out. The first stanza conveys calm, as well as ...

This is my first time reading your work, and I really like it. The voice of Liz seems very strong and you put enough detail and her thoughts into the ...

This is a nice poem with an amazing message. I like the rhymes and the flow of the piece. I love the whole poem. I have just a one suggestion: ...

This a really nice poem. Sometimes it's hard to find a poem out there with such a deep underlying message, especially such a beautiful one. The one thing I am ...

This was a nice poem. I liked the imagery, very creative. I just think that with the line, "with each breath icy needles flooded my lungs," maybe "flooded" should be ...