Tylersmetts

The simplistic optimism in this poem is nice, I enjoyed that. Be careful of using contractions when writing formally though, it interrupts the flow of the poem.

The rhythm of this poem is fun, and basically demands that you read through following a strict meter. I found myself more entertained by the "bouncy" way the stanzas read ...

This poem has a great way of surrounding you with its imagery, the importance of which is somewhat unclear. While I can really only speculate on what meaning the author ...

I imagine as you move That you do it with such grace To defy in me The strong conviction That I’ve been misplaced. I watch and you are lonely, Held ...