Tyd

Hey I really liked it! I think the way your words flow is beautiful and a lot of your phrases feel very powerful. I star'd ya :)

It's good for a stand-alone piece. I loved the intro, it seemed very detailed and i imagined it well in my head :P

I too loved the arabian-desert feel to it! There is some VERY good description, although in some cases, i think it would be better to not stop and describe something, ...

I only have read the lion, the witch and the wardrobe book :P I thought it was compelling but not all that great in narrative :p

OO sounds really good! I'll definately look it up next time i hunt for a book!

Hmm, i am looking for a new book to read; this one seems interestingly enough... whats it about?