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Re: start of a song
What do you think? Hope you like it. :D Just another day In another way Keep on going on Till its all gone I wake up another day Put on ...
Nov 28, 2005 -
Re: Beggining of a novel
This is some thing I have been working on for a while. Hope you like it :D Akaira walked down the main street of Ravenswill. The only inn in the ...
Nov 23, 2005 -
Re: Beggining of a hopefully novel, eddited
Thanks to all the help I got I was able to eddit this. Hope you like it. :D I am thinking of calling this [i]Times Turning[/i], what do you think? ...
Nov 13, 2005 -
Re: New Year's Death Song
Yeah, I see what your saying. I will wait one or two more weeks to see if I get any more replies before I post it revised. When I do ...
Nov 8, 2005 -
Re: -Crumpled Dreams-
I really liked. Though I think you should explain why he kept the egg if it caused him so much trouble. Was it a feeling, or was it the dream ...
Nov 5, 2005 -
Re: New Year's Death Song
This something I wrote in like one minute and thought it up in less time, so please be gentle. :wink: This is the prologue. A young girl exited her house. ...
Nov 5, 2005 -
Re: Times of Sorrow
I am sorry for the confusion. In my profile I accidentally changed the year I was born when I changed it. Thanks for pointing that out, I changed it to ...
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Falling Tears
This some thing I free wrote. So I hope you Like it. Hearts breaking Friends leaving Tears falling Like petals from a flower Frown covered Smiles levered Hopes lowered Reasons ...
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: Please read and critique! I am starved for an audience.
This is great!!! I love it how you described the feeling of complete and utter sorrow to such a degree. I hope to read more of your writing. Keep on ...
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: Times of Sorrow
This is a little poem I had to do in my Language Arts class. I hope you like. :P Times of sorrow Feeling hollow Many follow Times of sorrow A ...
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: An Ode to Green Day
Your poem is awesome, mostly because it was about Green Day, but don't get me wrong it was still good. P.S. Green Day rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: A War In Evol | Chapter I: The Silver Eagles
I really liked it, though you did have some grammatical problems. Like when you wrote“I don’t want to give you the same war speech we’ve ever heard.". In stead of ...
Oct 23, 2005 -
Re: delete this!
Sorry this post has been deleted. Sorry for any inconvenience. :lol:
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: Are We All Just American Idiots?
I am an America, and I am a fan of Green Day. My favorite song in the album is American Idiot. I think the most politics in the USA are ...
Oct 21, 2005 -
Re: Atomic Number 50
[color=cyan]I'm not realy good at lyrics myself, but to me it was great.I hope to read more of your stuff later. :P [/color]
Oct 20, 2005
