Twitch111

A little girl peeked into the kitchen. An old man sat upon a stool. One foot was stretched out in front of him, obviously to avoid causing pain. In front ...

I liked it. :D The only objection that I have is that in the first couple paragraphs you used Billy too often. I might replace it every once in a ...

I found one mistake "but we no one". Next to that, it seems fantastic, good job. I love what you have written and where the plot seems to be going. ...

Fantastic! Thanks fo the reply, I will try it out. If anyone else has more ideas, the more the merrier, and the more likely I will find something that works.

Hello everyone, This is the main reason why I haven't been on here in what seems like forever. My main problem in writing is having the ideas flying through my ...

Had to add these. 1. The Farseer Trilogy by Robin Hobb 1. Assasin's Apprentice 2.Royal Assassin 3.Assassin's Quest 2 The Tawny Man by Robin Hobb 1.Fool's Errand 2.Golden Fool 3.Fool's ...

I feel depressed. :( None of you have mentioned any of these great books: 1.Wheel of Time by Robert Jordan (Best series ever!!! :P ) 2.Game of Thrones by George ...

I get really attached to my characters. They become like old friends to me.When I have to kill off a character it feels like I am killing one of my ...

The Fiddler

Well I've had allot of them up for a long time, and I'm not getting any more replies, so I want to delete those, but it won't let me.

It won't let me delete any of my posts please help.

I crept along the corridor in the shadows. I had every part of me covered but my eyes. The door was open. A soft glow came from the fire place ...

I think this is really good. If there is a second part I hope to read it.

This sounds very interesting. I can't wait to read the second part. be sure to put the unstoppable, except for taking out the batteries, talking.

I thought it was great even though you have some typos.Like you forgot to capitalize "Wick" several times and forgot to put the "o" in on. Like in this sentence ...