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Re: Guttersnipe, Chapters 1-3 [new and improved]
I thought that this was good,but a few sentances didn't read that well,and I wasn't too sure if the grammer was strictly...gramatical. "not too hot that the heat permeated every ...
Feb 8, 2007
I thought that this was good,but a few sentances didn't read that well,and I wasn't too sure if the grammer was strictly...gramatical. "not too hot that the heat permeated every ...
Feb 8, 2007