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Didn't someone say about walking a dog rather than being a puppeteer when writing? Ultimately, writing, like practically everything we do, is about power, but kid yourself that the characters ...

Definately change it. Jack Russell is... ew. It's like someone on here said about their character called John Mills. I remember it, because of that. >.

I think you should only use a flashback if the scene is powerful enough. That's what I've read, and I think it makes sense. And as Vernon said, itallics and ...

And the bit/teeny tiny fragments that I have read do look to be awesome!

Oh, and if anyone finds any good articles - especially on why people write Sues, as opposed to why they shouldn't - I'd love to see 'em. How many "litmus ...

Lol, Meep, I've done that test loads of times, and the Raven's in the black. Is it black? But seriously, she's been called that since forever, so it is really ...

*cowers* Does it really, really hurt if I have an M/C called Raven? *cowers some more* Well anyway, it's too late now, she's been the Raven since anything existed and ...

Peacocks were supposed to be bad luck, but I forget who by. The Romans? Something to do with their cry being a forerunner of death.

I'm sad. I do this all the time. >.< I've never found anyone who even comes close to being the Raven, though. Good, sa?

Have one where they don't talk, and don't do anthropomorphic things, like laughing, shaking their heads, getting in relationships, and all that jazz.

I've never heard anyone use either term over here in Britain. Maybe it's just a Yank thing?

"Hello," said Bob. "It's a nice day, isn't it?" Voila. :) If it's a continuing on of speech, then you use another comma. Thus: "What," said Bob, "is the day ...

What type is it? What fiction is it a fan of? I'd suggest taking a break and letting it compost in your mind for a bit. You might find some ...

Laurel and Hardy were Masons, I think. They say several times about "a Lodge." But "The Valley of Fear", by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle mentions Masons in, if you want ...

How do you know what to put in it? :roll: