Twit

9/10 Cool! It's a great hook and I'd definitely read on. I don't know though, it's a little impersonal, which is why only the 9 and not a full 10. ...

Eyes closed.

10/10 I like it, it sets up the scenario, acts as a hook and gives us a bit of character development all at once. The sun was rising over the ...

"Boiled." ~Thaw "Boiled, I suppose." ~Wuthering "I don't like eggs." ~Josiah Scroggins "Neither do I." ~Richard Makepeace Sunset or sunrise?

Dizzy.

3/10 Too melodramatic. "She was lost" is very blunt, and I'd prefer a little more subtlety. The ellipsis and "but the worst part of it was" is too cliche and ...

Stonehenge

Hello, my name is Finn and I'm going to be in prison in a few chapters' time.

Blink, you should do that, and then post the transcript of your telephone conversation. XD

1. Yep. 2. Do not edit. Heck, no. 3. Good question. I wish I knew the answer. Lol. I don't know. Just make sure you love your characters; you'll discover ...

"Keep it." ~the Raven "Keep the money, sell the wallet." ~Kit "Carry it around for a while, then use it in an emergency." ~Heron "Leave it." ~Jean "Take it home ...

"Surely normal is subjective? My normal may not be your normal, his normal sure ain't hers, and Life Rocks, Actually." ~the Raven "In your opinion, of course." ~Fal. "No, it ...

I'm ready! Well, ready as in really excited, but I have only a very, very vague idea for a plot. This will be my third year doing it!

The Prestige by Christopher Priest Forrest Gump by Winston Groom Leave it to Psmith by PG Wodehouse The novelisation of Ladyhawke by Joan Vinge, I think?

Depending on which genre it was under and what mood I was in, I might pick it up. It sounds a bit too title-ish, you know? A bit too clever. ...