Twit

Very nice! I love the eyes especially, it's like she's wearing the world's longest false lashes, lol, very dark and sooty. I think I like it before the sparkle/splatter best, ...

Well, I have to admit that I probably wouldn't pick this up. It looks like an unoriginal graphic novel. Anime faces are so over used, and it's not even clear ...

Hoohoo Skinsa! I guess I like it. I mean, I do like it because it's an interesting way to begin and interesting is good, but... I don't know. It seems ...

Hellooooo I'm not sure which one of these I like best. The coloured one is more interesting, but the flatness of the colour, no texture to it, makes the whole ...

"Prophecy." ~Jason "Super charisma." *grins* ~Alexandros "I just want to return home." ~Selene "I would love to be able to fly, to really and truly fly and be free." ~Echo ...

"Buy lots of books. And a house somewhere far away." ~Jason "Go to one of the human cities and party my butt off!" ~Alexandros "Ohhh, dresses, jewels, that Egyptian perfume... ...

Hey! This looks really nice! I love the colours; it's lovely and bright and vivid. The orca especially looks very cute. ^_^ However, both the girl and the orca look ...

Dude, sweet . So wait, each war is two hours? So that means writing for two straight hours? o_O

Currently my issues are that I'm filling in gaps here and working around half a novel already. Huh, that's funny. That's exactly what I'm doing. :)

"That would be rather odd, seeing as I look quite a bit like my mam. But... I don't know. I suppose I'd be upset. A bit." ~the Raven "What does ...

Feet

Bagsie spot please!

Moon

6/10 You have a good strong character voice already established in just a few sentences, but the dialogue, which is vitally important, runs lopsided and doesn't sound very realistic. Try ...

"My curved needles and goggles." ~Victor "The comb he gave me." ~Justine "My mother's necklace, Romeo and Juliet , that little glass swan and my wreath of dried roses." ~Elizabeth ...