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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Not that much. After all, it doesn't really get you anywhere... happy , you know?" ~the Raven "Oh, very highly! Sewing, singing, drawing, they're all vital if you want to ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
4/10 Um. All right. Sounds like The Last House on the Left, which is one of the most boring titles ever. I probably wouldn't pick it up. It doesn't give ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Rate the scene above you
7/10 LOL, quite funny. The immaturity of the gods was good, although perhaps a touch over the top. The listing of names at the beginning ("Demeter, Hestia, Poseidon, Hades, and ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
9/10 The description threw me off a little at first, but once it got going, it was good. The humour really drew me in -- that, I think, more than ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
5/10 I'd read the next line to see what curious thing it was, but probably no more than that. Love stories are made of meh. ‘This is the tale of ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
I don't know, it seems like it could be about anything. Definitely set in America, with a teenage or preteen girl as the M/C. I'm thinking dust and sun with ...
May 21, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"This sounds familiar. Bright red Converse, just 'cos, you know, Converse is awesome, and everybody loves them." ~the Raven "Something scuffed an' practical, only because it's scuffed an' practical."
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
Hmm, quite interesting. I'd definitely read on until the first bits of dialogue and see what happens. I don't quite see how the temperature is mirrored by the lovers, though? ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds weird and not quite right. Maybe a romance, or a horror? I don't think I'd pick it up, it doesn't sound right. Although I might look at the cover ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Skirt
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Spiders." ~Jason "That I'll loose that special touch of mine. The unbounded charisma oozing from every pore." ~Alexandros "That Myron will cheat on me." ~Lysandra "That Lysandra will find someone ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Why do any of them have to be crazy?" ~Jason
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Complain about the short notice. Then find Alexandros and go home to my parents and cry." ~Jason "Find a nymph, some friends and a wineskin." ~Alexandros "Spend it in Myron's ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Earth." ~Sophia "Earth, I think." ~Lysandra "Earth. Definately." ~Myron "Earth. Har-har-har... Fire, I think, or air. Hang on, how do I identify with an element, again?" ~Jason "Air? Stupid question,
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: I drew an Old Man...
Well, "sweet" is not really the word I would have used, but hey. It's good, (and I actually quite like charcoal, mostly because of the mess. It gives visible proof ...
Apr 15, 2009
