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Five Cold. The Raven curled up tight and wrapped her arms around herself, her eyes still shut. She tried to scrub her upper arms with her hands without waking but ...

Book or Movie? Movie or Book? Movies can have more of an oomph to them, but books are more personal, more there . Eeurh. A Good Book, as it's rarer.

I'm not quite sure I understand Rule #2 of the "don't"s, but that's a chapter one, and just the chapter one, no more'n all. :)

Hi! This was very short, but I think it works fine as a prologue of something bigger. It was easy to read, and the first lines definitely caught my attention. ...

I was five years old when I realized I was different. For a first line, this really sucks. It’s flat, clichéd and boring. Sorry, but there it is. I remember ...

Title: Scavenger (Chapter One) Genre: Fantasy/Alternate History Link: Please be as harsh as poss., and especially on whether it works as a first chapter. Thanks!

Title: Scavenger (Chapter One) Link: Genre: Fantasy/Alternate History If and when you have enough time to get to it. :D

Could you review this for me, please? It's a first chapter and so needs a lot of work.

‘So, do we kill it?’ ‘No. We’re going to look at it.’ ‘Druuuuuuuth. We looked at it all yesterday.’ ‘And we’re going to be looking at it again today.’ ‘It’s ...

2/10 Meh. Bleh.

Well, short. :) It pulled my head to one side and I winced when a hair was plucked from my scalp. ONE hair? I can't think right now how you ...

The tail and the flames are awesome, but the wolf looks more like a cartoon husky than anything else. I assume it's from something (anime related?)? It's actually very cool. ...

So, I have a ten pound book token, and was thinking about using it to buy a good writing book. Any suggestions? Anything on the whole writing shebang is good, ...

Oh-h, picture! I like that one better than the first one (Wed Oct 10, 2007). More... thing, you know?

Bunchana? Bunchana Banana?