Twit

Like you said, not an immediate hook, but still intriguing. It starts off peacefully, but I'd definitely read on to see what came after. Shadow Tattybogle was quite certain of ...

Round

Gee. Um, this is quite complicated, isn't it? :shock: But thanks!

"As the philosopher Jagger said, 'You can't always get what you want'." ~Our favourite Diagnostician

No question! I'll ask one: Do you mind a break in your routine?

Cloud

Stars

Big hat

"Morley's song." ~Shadow "Loch Lomond." ~Fal. "Life on Mars." ~Clover Do you like chocolate?

Long robes.

It's all right. It's rather quiet, but I'd read on to perhaps the end of the chapter. If it hadn't picked up by then, I probably wouldn't read on. Of ...

Dark and erotic story about demons and humans with a vampire thrown in amidst lots of witchcraft and sorcery and sex scenes. Black and bloody cover art. Would never pick ...

White

Blondie has just killed a rat; he’s got its tail in his fore finger and his thumb and is swinging it just like a pendulum. Swinging the seconds away. While ...

The night was very dark, with the moon covered by clouds heavy with rain. Too many “with”s. Maybe split this into two sentences? “The night was very dark. The moon ...