Twit

8/10 Cool. Vague but cool.

"You can't do anything with days, they do things to you." ~Shadow "Well, at the moment it was supposed to be parties and dances but now they've all been cancelled!" ...

*Shadow blinks* "Silly? What is silly? Silly like dragon-silly?" "She means you, hybrid." ~Jemima "Oh! Oh, me. Why didn't she say so?" ~Shadow "Shadow's not silly, she's just... well, she's ...

10/10 Too troo. 8/10 Um, lol. Haha. Ha.

*puts her head on one side* "Marylyn. Miss Marylyn. So many letters! There's an m and an n and l-y-n and yet another y! Why so many 'y's? Why why ...

"Those teeny-weeny little squiggles that mean words and numbers and capture the essence of things gone before?" ~Shadow "I can read!" ~Kit "Doing my A-levels at the moment." ~Clover "I ...

4/10 Lots of purple. Bit too much purple, actually. But points for the purple.

He might have a really cool sword but he's green and looks like plastic. Still, cool sword... 4/10

Small with not perfect skin and a cute look. Maybe light brown/blond.

5/10 All right, but not very exciting.

*squints* Points for piratey-looking skull and crossbones, but it's not very clear what it is. 2/10

You just need to find another medium. So hai and welcome and have a nice time here and be sure to read the Rules! Which is, in itself, part of ...

2/10 Weird, and I can hardly see what it is.

Probably.

Hi! I've read all the chapters you've put up so far, so I might point out that you're posting too many chapters and not reviewing enough of other people's works. ...