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  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I don't know. It sounds really boring, like a story of love and life and other icky stuff. Wouldn't bother picking it up. The Paper-Eater

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    QUESTION! Do you have a pet?

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Deliverance: Prologue

    Hi! This was quite cool and dramatic. :D However, I did notice a few things, mainly about the baby. You say twice that it's just been born, but it doesn't ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Either a really cool fantasy story about giants and races going extinct, or a novel about someone who had great aspirations, but gets nowhere. Either way, I'd probably pick it ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Gaspard. No, wait, I already have. Kizzie and whatshisface, then." ~Phoebe "People who barge in and make stupid comments about them ." ~Gaspard "Damaris. I do like her, but she ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "Kitty! Kitty kitty kitty kitty!" ~Phoebe "Don't be immature." ~Gaspard "Sterling ignored the frog." ~Phoebe "Don't be so rude to the lady!" ~Gaspard "That was rude, Phoebe." ~Sterling "Oh. Sorry. ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: We All Fall Down

    Hi! This was kind of interesting, but there wasn't much to it. Girl sleeps with boyfriend, girl gets depressed and dies. Jadyn's reaction seemed over the top, but I thought ...

    Apr 1, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Mary the Slave girl

    Hi! This was very, very short. Are you planning on adding to it? Although the title drew me in, it sounds a bit childish, you know? so maybe change it. ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: A tv show about author...

    **MOVED TO ENTERTAINMENT**

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    10/10 Purty!

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    S'arite. Minus points for Keira Knightley, bonus points for Lizzie. 5/10.

    Mar 27, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Red." ~Phoebe "Yellow." ~Kester "White. Pink." ~Anna *shrug* ~Gaspard "I quite like blue" ~Heron "Don't have one." ~Taimse "Yellow." ~Maggie "None of your business." ~Damaris Who was your first teach

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Solve this history mystery

    Osama/Obama. Maybe it's a typo.

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    *examines fingernails modestly* "This morning." ~Phoebe "Oh yes, you had to rub it in, didn't you? It's been months. Months! And now there's talk about axing the story completely! She's ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    *eyeing Bobbie* "Odds fish." ~Phoebe "Phoebe has a jaded view of the world." ~Anna "No reason why not to, though, is there?" ~Kester "The nice people in the world?" ~Anna ...

    Mar 24, 2009


Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare