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Re: Title Feedback
I don't know. It sounds really boring, like a story of love and life and other icky stuff. Wouldn't bother picking it up. The Paper-Eater
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
QUESTION! Do you have a pet?
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Deliverance: Prologue
Hi! This was quite cool and dramatic. :D However, I did notice a few things, mainly about the baby. You say twice that it's just been born, but it doesn't ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
Either a really cool fantasy story about giants and races going extinct, or a novel about someone who had great aspirations, but gets nowhere. Either way, I'd probably pick it ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Gaspard. No, wait, I already have. Kizzie and whatshisface, then." ~Phoebe "People who barge in and make stupid comments about them ." ~Gaspard "Damaris. I do like her, but she ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Kitty! Kitty kitty kitty kitty!" ~Phoebe "Don't be immature." ~Gaspard "Sterling ignored the frog." ~Phoebe "Don't be so rude to the lady!" ~Gaspard "That was rude, Phoebe." ~Sterling "Oh. Sorry. ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: We All Fall Down
Hi! This was kind of interesting, but there wasn't much to it. Girl sleeps with boyfriend, girl gets depressed and dies. Jadyn's reaction seemed over the top, but I thought ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Mary the Slave girl
Hi! This was very, very short. Are you planning on adding to it? Although the title drew me in, it sounds a bit childish, you know? so maybe change it. ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: A tv show about author...
**MOVED TO ENTERTAINMENT**
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
10/10 Purty!
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
S'arite. Minus points for Keira Knightley, bonus points for Lizzie. 5/10.
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Red." ~Phoebe "Yellow." ~Kester "White. Pink." ~Anna *shrug* ~Gaspard "I quite like blue" ~Heron "Don't have one." ~Taimse "Yellow." ~Maggie "None of your business." ~Damaris Who was your first teach
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: Solve this history mystery
Osama/Obama. Maybe it's a typo.
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
*examines fingernails modestly* "This morning." ~Phoebe "Oh yes, you had to rub it in, didn't you? It's been months. Months! And now there's talk about axing the story completely! She's ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Character dialogue
*eyeing Bobbie* "Odds fish." ~Phoebe "Phoebe has a jaded view of the world." ~Anna "No reason why not to, though, is there?" ~Kester "The nice people in the world?" ~Anna ...
Mar 24, 2009
