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Woah, this was really long and really difficult to read. Sorry, but it was. You forgot lots of punctuation and grammer. Like here: “ y eah . ” I choked ...

Hai! Lol, this was quite funny and interesting. I like the rabid cat. :lol: I think you told a bit too much, when, as it's Tory's diary, she wouldn't need ...

They don't quite fit your criteria, but I recommend Catherine Webb's books, because they're awesome, funny fantasy and I haven't met anyone who's read them yet.

Thanks! :D

Title: Faery Dancer #1 Genre: Historical Link: Summary: Set in Stuart England, a girl runs away from a freak show and has to cope with living in the outside world. ...

It's historical fiction, and if you could focus on whether it works as a first chapter, character impressions and general whatevers. Thanks! :D

An amzing harsh, lemon-juice-in-paper-cut harsh critique, please, especially on the title, first chapter-ness and characters. Thanks! :D

‘They stole little Bridget For seven years long; When she came down again, Her friends were all gone.’ –The Fairies, William Allingham I There were flames in my feet. At ...

Hi, Gyr! :D Her midsection bulged and she screamed, her dress torn, her face red, her pain radiating out like a tide as she continued to name me: “Ariel, Ariel, ...

Filler

Boring. The end of what? It doesn't tell me anything, other than it probably wouldn't be worth picking it up. Sorry. The Man in the Clouds

*noms and slurps* Niiiiice. :)

Chocolate

Quite cool, very nicely written, and if I liked romance, it'd probably be a great hook. I don't like romance, but I'd still probably read on at least a little ...

"Myself. Of course." ~Phoebe "Gaspard. He's so - so - so right ." ~Leticia "I - I don't know." ~Anna "Erm, I think you have the wrong person." ~Kester "Rub ...