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Re: Rate the first sentence above you
4/10 It's too long with too much in it. Is that a run-on? You've two points in there and the sentence only has room for one. Points however for throwing ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"All sorts. I'm not limited to genres or people, you know? I love everything." ~Raven "Noise, techno remixes, that kind of thing. Words aren't so important as the beat." ~Ned ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Laurence Olivier
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: "The Kings' Advisors" beginning
Hi. ^____^ Jeremiah stood, staring out the window before him. It was not a pleasant sight to see through the open space, but then again, was Jerusalem a pleasant place ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Wolf Moon-Chapter 3: The Birth; 19 years ago
A cry ran from the birthing room from the lungs of a strong baby girl that had unfortunately been brought to life under the Evil moon, the Dark Moon, the ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Leia's Gift (Maybe Part One)
Hai! First off, I don’t get why you bolded some parts and meant to italicise others? I hid were I always hide , in the attic silently letting my tears ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Leoragon, Dragon Fantasy! [Chap. 1]
'lo. ^______________^ Well, you said you didn't want nitpicks or grammar, but you really should get it sorted out. You've almost no punctuation, which makes this difficult to read and ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Boys wearing trousers around ankles or bums
But then, who are you to say 'tisn't fashion? Fashion is the opinion of the majority and not individuals. Boys feel a need to show off their butts. It's the ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: I Do Not Like Megan Fox
Media and men are shallow.
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
3/10 Not really possible.
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
6/10 Art is beauty but it isn't always pictures. The person with the unpronouncable name is narrow-minded.
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: SKill vs. Soul?
Both, but perhaps more skill than soul. You could say that Paolini put his soul into Eragon but he lacked the skill to make it a good read.
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Whatzitcalled
Aren't Jewish lesbians kind of contradictory? Try a thesaurus, but don't call them "The Nuns of _____" It sounds too much like "The Guns of Navarone". To me it does, ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Sheep, Weaving, and Serfdom
Wiki, this post is from three years ago. Remember to check the date on topics and don't bring them up from the dark, murky depths of the forum. It's usually ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Three New Mods!
Lol, Mars. Congrads, guyses. Galses.
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