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  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    4/10 It's too long with too much in it. Is that a run-on? You've two points in there and the sentence only has room for one. Points however for throwing ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "All sorts. I'm not limited to genres or people, you know? I love everything." ~Raven "Noise, techno remixes, that kind of thing. Words aren't so important as the beat." ~Ned ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Laurence Olivier

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: "The Kings' Advisors" beginning

    Hi. ^____^ Jeremiah stood, staring out the window before him. It was not a pleasant sight to see through the open space, but then again, was Jerusalem a pleasant place ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Wolf Moon-Chapter 3: The Birth; 19 years ago

    A cry ran from the birthing room from the lungs of a strong baby girl that had unfortunately been brought to life under the Evil moon, the Dark Moon, the ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Leia's Gift (Maybe Part One)

    Hai! First off, I don’t get why you bolded some parts and meant to italicise others? I hid were I always hide , in the attic silently letting my tears ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Leoragon, Dragon Fantasy! [Chap. 1]

    'lo. ^______________^ Well, you said you didn't want nitpicks or grammar, but you really should get it sorted out. You've almost no punctuation, which makes this difficult to read and ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Boys wearing trousers around ankles or bums

    But then, who are you to say 'tisn't fashion? Fashion is the opinion of the majority and not individuals. Boys feel a need to show off their butts. It's the ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: I Do Not Like Megan Fox

    Media and men are shallow.

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    3/10 Not really possible.

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]

    6/10 Art is beauty but it isn't always pictures. The person with the unpronouncable name is narrow-minded.

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: SKill vs. Soul?

    Both, but perhaps more skill than soul. You could say that Paolini put his soul into Eragon but he lacked the skill to make it a good read.

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Research Re: Whatzitcalled

    Aren't Jewish lesbians kind of contradictory? Try a thesaurus, but don't call them "The Nuns of _____" It sounds too much like "The Guns of Navarone". To me it does, ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Research Archives Re: Sheep, Weaving, and Serfdom

    Wiki, this post is from three years ago. Remember to check the date on topics and don't bring them up from the dark, murky depths of the forum. It's usually ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Three New Mods!

    Lol, Mars. Congrads, guyses. Galses.

    Jun 30, 2009


Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe