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Re: Leah Lightning Introduction *2nd Draft*
Hai! I have to say, this didn't really grab my interest. For starters, the accent really, really, really annoyed me. If she’s writing it, she wouldn’t write words the way ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: Batman is pretty much awesome!
I see Alfred! :D
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I get this every time I try to go to the index page, or if I try to go to the Home Page straight from Google. General Error SQL ERROR ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: The Attack
Hai! I see that this is your first post, so welcome to YWS! It’s part of the Rules that a member must submit at least two reviews (helpful and considerate) ...
Oct 20, 2009 -
Re: How to Receive a Gift- <old work, hardcore criticism?>
First, please consider who is giving you the gift? You don’t need that question mark, make the sentence a command. WARNING//: This is very important, if the person giving you ...
Oct 19, 2009 -
Re: Dollhouse
Hai! I don't think I quite "got" this. It sounded really pretty, and it was very well wriiten and nicely descriptive, but I don't get what it is that you're ...
Oct 19, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
10/10: Kewlz. 2/10: Less kewl, but very Stephen Fry.
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
5/10 Pretty, but not desperately practical.
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: An Idle Thought: NaRevWriMo???
That is really cool. ^^ You could have it in the summer holidays so people have more time to do it.
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Your Style
Great tutorial-thingie, WD. :D Those points -- reading, writing and listening -- seem to me to be the best things you can do anyway, no matter what part of your ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Glimmer 2.0
I always knew I was different, just how different never hit me until now. Worst beginning line ever. Sorry, but it is. It’s clichéd, cheesy and boring and tell-y. However, ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)
The sky was the color of Pepto-Bismol that summer evening. My friend Bailey and I sat on the curb of her street outside of her house. Our favorite song was ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Keep it." ~the Raven "Keep the money, sell the wallet." ~Kit "Carry it around for a while, then use it in an emergency." ~Heron "Leave it." ~Jean "Take it home ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)
question # 1: Does this paragraph make any since? I guess you could say we were two shirts tossed into a cat filled room. Each individual cat hair was like ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)
The dialogue part doesn’t really go anywhere. It could tell us about the two characters, but it doesn’t. Try and put more personality into their speech – different speech patters, ...
Sep 19, 2009
