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Hey! I like your title, cos it reminds me of that film with the giant ants in, but maybe that's not the vibe you were going for, lol... You write ...

Hey! It's fantasy, so I apologize, and feel free to hand me the mitten if you so wish. :)

Hey Rosey! I really, really liked this; your style was very good and it flowed extremely well. I really liked the conflicted relationship between the girl and the knight, and ...

O hai dood. :mrgreen: This is fantasy -- I hope that's up your street?

Heylooooooo :) Thanksie!

Hi! First off, congrats on having a very cool title. It’s simple and a little obvious, but it drew me in. Reminds me of The Extraordinary and Unusual Adventures of ...

This isn't a short story, but it's just the first chapter of something longer, and you don't have to review the rest at all... It's not on the forums anyways, ...

Hi! I have to admit, I am not the best person to review something like this. I loathe Twilight with every part of my soul. I daydream about meeting Stephenie ...

There was a tune stuck in my head. I always seemed to have a tune stuck in my head these days. my ship sailed from China with a cargo of ...

This was very eccentric. This is like the love-child of Alice Through The Looking Glass and Monty Python, which is good, but weird. The world might not be ready for ...

"I chew gum because I kid myself that it helps me think when I should be doing my coursework. I mean, it does, sometimes. Help, I mean." ~Clover "I don't ...

A bump on the shoulder by a stranger caused me to jump and I looked at him with my eyes, which turned bright silver with my anxiety. The power that ...

Hai! First off, you need spacing between your paragraphs, otherwise all I see is a huge block of text with an unfriendly glare. Leave a line between each paragraph and ...

I'm... back-ish... I guess? There's so many new people, it's scary. O_O I wanna find a shell and peep at everyone, lol.

Hi! This was a good story, very hard-hitting and emotional, and you told it well. Even though this was a short piece of writing, I got a good sense of ...