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Hai! The figure flashed her Trident smile at Anna, who stared at her in silent awe. Trident? Like the gum, or like King Neptune? She blinked. Looked up at the ...

ONE I press my nose against the shop window. Behind the mist my breath makes on the glass, the colours of the dress blur together; pink and white silk and ...

Hai Sifdottir! Your writing sound cool! Kind of like Tim Burton's thing, mixing the everyday with the crazy. Anyway, welcome and all that sauce! :D -twit

Hai! This was beautifully written, Gadzila! It was very poetical and there was some lovely imagery and description. It was quite short, so there wasn't much opportunity for character development, ...

Horses! *ahem* Greetings, non-alligator-riding mortal, and welcome to Yewis. ^_^ When reviewing, it's good to always mention something nice, and say the bad stuff in a positive way. Men In ...

Hai Ammaer, and welcome to YWS! About your story -- I'd say post it in fanfiction. I think that if a story isn't mainly focused on an original character, it ...

Hi! I really liked this. It was very meaningful, and I liked the vague, detached tone and the rhythm. The repetition of "she's going to be a model" is good ...

Lol, yes.

Wowsers. This is awesome. XD I'd keep the white bits because I like the textured feel it gives. The writing is rather difficult to read, because it looks a bit ...

Hai! I’m here because I liked your subject description. :mrgreen: I should have read the chapters before this, I guess, but I wanted to see what this was like, so... ...

Hai! I was forum-mooching and suddenly remembered that I’d read the prologue for this story some time ago and wondered if you’d put up anymore. And you have. Which is ...

Hai! This was very well done indeed. Packed with emotion, great writing style, great flow, perfect sense of whatchacallit all the way through. However , although I enjoyed this as ...

Hai! This is an interesting theme; it really is "the thing" to be unique in some weird way nowadays. It's like in TV series -- the protagonist has to be ...

Hai! I didn’t like this that much; not just because I’m not keen on romance, but because—well, because nothing much happened. I wasn’t expecting car-chases and sudden development of super-powe